Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This essay will discribe about obesity like a strong problem in very many countries. In the powerfull contries had more problem like poor country.
Obesity is big problems in most country. People with obesity have health problem. For example, The United State of America spend more like 10 billion dollars for support are people with obesity. Obesity is culture in most region on the world.
The rich countrs had chip food and food have bad concentate toxid. We have nitrate in the food . The rich country have big web of fast food like Mcdonalds or Burger King as the not delishes food. But people tasted and eat it. In the poor country , for example, middle east continent , people don't have food because don't have a money for food. Many people die with out food. The world don't have balance between rich country and poor country. Nowaday, the rich country send aid to poor country like products, food, close and so on. But food it so important .
In counlusin , obesity is very big problem in many rich and poor country. For my opionion, we can't solve this problem because people never stop eating fast food and gang products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72588832487 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12392392471 2.71678728327 78% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0798245964 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.7647058824 104.977214359 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5882352941 20.9669160288 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.17647058824 7.25397266985 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16081770748 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687338204519 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729108033249 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143739283374 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679375101891 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 12.6369458128 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 53.1260098522 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.9458128079 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.97 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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