Some people think that when young people use more computers and
mobile phones, their reading and writing skills are affected. To what
extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people that literary skills of children has a great effect by the overuse of electronic gadgets. In my opinion, I believe that constant usage of cell phones and computers by the youngsters affects their vocabulary development and slows up their writing speed.
We all are aware that vocabulary is an integral part of any form of communication in real life. However, it is observed that when young children spend a lot of time using the computers and mobile phones they fail to develop their vocabulary skills. Furthermore, they will also be not be able to comprehend well with their friend, family members and other members of the society.
For instance, when children are given an opportunity to speak before a large crowd they usually lack confidence as they also develop stage fear.
Also it is evident that the writing skills gets deteriorated as kids tend to type letters on the computers and mobile phones. They begin to depend on these gadgets as they are simpler to use and saves a lot of their time.Certainly, this leads to effects such as slow writing, spelling errors and also they would not have a legible writing due to lack of writing practice.
For example, when the children have to appear for their board exams, they will feel incompetent as it is obvious that they will be unable to complete the exam at the specified time because of their slow writing speed and they also tend to make lot of spelling errors.
In conclusion, I believe that youngsters are adversely affected by the usage of modern gadgets especially it effects their literary skills.
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- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of adults compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Certainly
...er to use and saves a lot of their time.Certainly, this leads to effects such as slow wri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59726827054 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0026851184 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168019102457 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750015614978 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531523263256 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871377835291 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565596542893 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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