Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
It is true that, protecting natural system of earth must be an important matter of every person. However, other than the verbal speech, many people fail to cope with the exact thing. In this essay explain about the reason behind such attitude and elaborate some essential measures to overcome this negligence.
Initially, it is clear that, most of the people aware and needs to do some expert things to the wellness of environment. At once, make use of some detrimental action on to the earth for the sake of oneself or selfishness may alter the leading agenda.In other words, people knows that, sand mining and rock breaking are the common cause of many environmental problem. Similarly, excessive use of plastic and in organic materials would have deleterious effect on surroundings. Although, people intentionally seem to use that for the easiness of life and self satisfaction. Moreover, actually, the other main cause of this attitude by the improper awareness or lack of deep knowledge regarding the catastrophic side effects of negligence.
Nevertheless, government and public support group has plentiful things could do for the worth leading life of environment by strict legislation, law enforcement, and educational programs. In brief, not only certain environmentalist or authorized government officials, but also every person must take action against the environmental hazard behavior irrespective of selfishness. Apparently, punish those who disrespect the rules without consider the fame, face and mostly bribe action. Furthermore, instruct every one from the school period put basement regarding the environmental preserve actions and importance of saving. For instance, child grown up by the proper foundation of earth protection would be the outcome of famous environmentalist and naturalist of former Malaysian parliament member Mr. X.
To sum up, even though, forgetfulness is a character of human, knowingly neglecting certain kind of adverse effects for the interest of oneself would be punishable. Thereby, everyone should take care of surroundings from the premise by the support of authority may lead to mesmerizing world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, well, for instance, in brief, kind of, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53333333333 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10546779265 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639393939394 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6027522067 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.733333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16240886077 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476732698813 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481540149251 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831963306091 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490930582618 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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