Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make
positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes
would you like to see in the new century?
Change is but natural. Everything undergoes a sea of changes over a period. Many changes
are expected in the 21st century. I am an optimistic person and I believe there will be many
beneficial changes which I would like to see in the 21st century.
To begin with many positive changes are expected in the medical field. Our researchers are
working day and night to find treatment of various types of cancers and other fatal diseases
such as AIDS. Because of advanced diagnostic techniques like MRI and nuclear scan, many
diseases can be detected so early that treatment is now possible. Advances are also going
on for cell transplant instead of organ transplant. If this becomes true, transplant surgeries
will become a thing of the past.
Furthermore, terrorism and wars will be there only in history books. The whole planet Earth
has already shrunk into a global village. National boundaries will disappear completely. We
will also have better alternatives to energy sources. Global warming will be dealt with
effectively and everyone will have the basic amenities of life.
Finally, illiteracy and poverty will be wiped out. Everyone would be educated and contented
and therefore there would be peace, harmony and happiness all around. Holidays in space
might be common. Change is imminent in every sphere of human life. What is certain is that
those who accept changes, instead of those resisting them, will be more successful.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that all this might sound too optimistic, but I would
surely wish to see all these in the 21st century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61466097847 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8824469623 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111978933388 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363333124296 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554273582133 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386033364953 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565527898577 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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