Recently, people are becoming less and less polite. What are the reasons for this behaviour? Do you agree with the statement? Give examples and experience.
There is a debate regarding people’s behaviour that is becoming less suitable to each other over the past years. I strongly believe that people are turning into alive zombies that do not show any kind of appreciation to the next. On this essay I will be giving the reasons why this behaviour must change.
There has been many instances in time where people used to say important words to demonstrate how well educated they are. It was common to step into an elevator and hear someone saying “good morning” or “thank you” when holding the door. However, nowadays the humankind is becoming too busy and do not have time to demonstrate any sort of respect or kindness to other prople. Our children are receiving less love, therefore, they are not able to express their feelings in a respectful way.
In addition, living in a globalized world, the technological advances are increasing the distance among people, rather than making them feel closer. Some examples can be given, such as when catching a train and watching the majority of people with heads down looking at their phones. These people feel the necessity exchange information all the time rather than try to connect to the person sit just next to them.
To sum up, I believe that people should have more control on their behaviour in order to demonstrate more respect and consideration to each other. Hence, the next generation will be able to live in a healthy environment where they are polite and respect their beloved ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a respectful way" with adverb for "respectful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... are not able to express their feelings in a respectful way. In addition, living in a globalized...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96862745098 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66870164568 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.7453697987 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181982194913 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642073621714 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594948504521 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109523097425 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089196632706 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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