A person should never make an important decision alone agree/ disagree.
Success and failure is comes to in everybody life. Life is comes with ebb’s and flows. Each day is different in everyone life. There is lot of problem in life and comes up with different solutions. People need to choose best solution. This give platform of decision making. Result is very important to make decision right or wrong. Where is debate with group of people to make decision alone or consulting with other. I agree with the statement that “A person should never make an important decision alone”. For the following reasons.
To begin with, consulting with someone else then people get more idea about decision. People have lot of information. People can know consequences of every information and they can filter information. It is difficulty to choose a right decision. When the decision maker take advice from the other people he or she knows the consequence before they take a decision and never feel regrets. For example, 5 years ago I took one decision to select my degree course in computer field at that time my brother told me that does not select computer field because they didn’t fined job in this field. I knows all consequences but I was select computer field.
Furthermore, make alone decision it same time negative impact on people. Other people have experience on similar problem so it’s help to make right decision. Take advice and share idea to other people then people know pro and cons so it’s help to choose best option out of their available option. Take right decision reduce stress and avoid to chance of failure. For instance, one of my friends had took one decision alone about career and she was failure on this decision. She suffering from stress and she was not do anything in their life.
To sum up, people need to consult with other people before make a decision in their life because they not fail in their life, so many option are available to make right decision and people not feel alone in their life. People always success. Hence, I agree with the statements that “A person should never make an important decision alone “.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
...ith different solutions. People need to choose best solution. This give platform of decisio...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...ferent solutions. People need to choose best solution. This give platform of decisio...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[5]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...with, consulting with someone else then people get more idea about decision. People ha...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
... didn't fined job in this field. I knows all consequences but I was select compu...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
... know pro and cons so it's help to choose best option out of their available option. T...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...ro and cons so it's help to choose best option out of their available option. T...
^^^^
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...re. For instance, one of my friends had took one decision alone about career and she...
^^^^
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...e suffering from stress and she was not do anything in their life. To sum up,...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... she was not do anything in their life. To sum up, people need to consult with o...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
...because they not fail in their life, so many option are available to make right decision an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89444444444 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44976693273 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8041727298 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7692307692 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279520292037 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867632858961 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156554175026 0.0737576698707 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207265183368 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125751269986 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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