The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over recent decades, the undeniable truth has been presented that the number of unhealthy people has burgeoned day by day. Some researchers opine that the figures dramatically tend to be lower for the next 10 years. Apropos of the statement, I strongly disagree with this view for several reasons.
To commence with one of the paramount considerations, unimaginable technological ameliorations extraordinarily improve to the modernized society since the technology has had a profound impact on every nation. To enumerate, acquisition of knowledge in doctors will tremendously gain numerous useful treatments and scientific breakthroughs from new discoveries to take care of their patients; therefore, people who have medical condition would be the negligible number. For instance, a variety of vaccines might be developed by experts in many fields of study with medical improvement.
Furthermore, the healthy trend increasing the high level of popularity is also one of the major points. To explain, it has inevitably become the mainstream because of various celebrities such as the Internet idols and some actresses who physically and mentally fit. For example, innumerable videos from beauty influencers show many different ways to do some exercises and stay perfect body and health. More importantly, countless researches found that the way has a high possibility to enormously convince adolescent to follow superstar’s paths.
In conclusion, various reasons have shown why I disagree with this controversial topic. However, it is ultimately incontrovertible that health is also the essential part to humanity but few types of humankind are still unconscious with this phenomenon; hence, the government should set the advertising campaign in order to make the incentive to citizens. In addition, the researchers should maximize the utmost value of technological development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74377224199 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33411126377 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67615658363 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.970843745 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162377119025 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050515275827 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453015770205 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895190087672 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369154369353 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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