The line graph illustrates the changes of the population in the time span between 1940 and 2000 in Columbia, Yamhill and Washington which are counties of the United States state of Oregon.
It is clear from the graph that each county of Oregon state reveal an increasing trend over all the years. However, Washington was evidently the county most populated whereas Columbia and Yamhill shared pretty much the same amount of population.
In 1940, inhabitants of Washington were exactly 75,000 whereas those of the other two counties were around 30 thousand. In the following thirty years, Washington increased quite sharply at just above 120,000, while Columbia and Yamhill saw a more moderate growth in the population, accounting almost 37 and 45 thousand inhabitants.
Since 1970 to 2000, both three counties experimented a steeper rise than that of the previous years but Washington remained the county with the most considerable increase. In fact, it climbed to nearly 240,000 people in 2000 while Columbia and Yamhill present in the same year figures of 75 and 90 thousand respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7137924426 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8747028369 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277760339643 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134648469541 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138522459043 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19607908039 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151909537661 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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