You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear sir,
I write this letter for seek your help in finding out my valuable bag, which I lost in your train during travelling.
I was travelled from Mumbai to Delhi in ‘ Rajdhani Express‘ , train number 26577, seat number C12 on 2nd November, 2018. I was in hurry as I have a meeting on that day so in such emergency, I forgot my valuable bag in the train only.
The bag is of black color. On the top of the bag Nike symbol is there. In the bag I have an apple laptop, pink color business meeting file, pendrive and some official paper is there.
I request you to please contact the cleaning staff and ask about the bag or to check at Delhi railway office whether they find anything related to this. If you will get any information please do contact me on this number7056172.
I look forward to receiving your answer soon.
Your’s faithfully,
Trupti Bhandari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o Delhi in ' Rajdhani Express' , train number 26577, seat number C12 on ...
^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2018'.
Suggestion: November 2018
...in number 26577, seat number C12 on 2nd November, 2018. I was in hurry as I have a meeting on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... seat number C12 on 2nd November, 2018. I was in hurry as I have a meeting on tha...
^
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her they find anything related to this. If you will get any information please do ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55853351551 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685534591195 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2624548541 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156256617647 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509566636799 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043138786261 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716718180149 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463200003472 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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