Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A relationship is defined as connection between two individuals. There are two possible paths for such connection to go through. The first one is based on the trust and other one on deceiving each other. Many people believe that deceiving is better in situations where truth may result in misunderstandings between partners. However, i believe that, whatever situation arises, the relationship between individuals should be based on trust that is ensured by telling the truth about everything and i prefer this because of several reasons.
Firstly, truth in the relationship can result in strong bond between partners. Considering my own example, i am in relationship, i attended a party and there i met someone else and talked to her for sometime. We spent a good time in party and some other persons saw us together as well. I was back to my routine life with my partner and at that time i had two options. Either to tell her everything truth or deceive her by not telling anything about what happened at party. I told her everything as it happened at party. I ensured her that only we two were of same age at that party. Some other day, she met a woman who told her about me that i was with someone else in the party. At that moment, my partner immediately replied her "Yes i know! my partner has already told me about this". Thus, it resulted in avoidance of conflicts between us. On the other hand, if i had not told her anything, then it must had resulted in creating misunderstanding between us.
Secondly, whatever someone does should expect the same in return. This can be justified by taking again the same example of myself joining that party in which i spent time with a girl other than my partner. If i persisted on lying about that event, then someday my partner will not have been reluctant in doing the same with some other guy and not telling me anything about it. As a result, our relationship might destroy completely.
Therefore, it can be concluded that, a relationship goes longer and becomes stronger if it is based on trust.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69613259669 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77758825057 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486187845304 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0371216275 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9523809524 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107354289654 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367476272295 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034727050053 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671712179681 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023828344618 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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