Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The issue to either allow young children advertising or not is controversial one. Many people believe that it should be allowed and others believe that it should not. As far as my opinion is concerned, i disagree with this idea.
There are many reasons to support my stand. Firstly, many times we see advertisements for increasing creativity of children. Drawing books are one example of such advertisements. There are many levels of a drawing book starting from just color filling and going up to requiring children to imitate them. This basic stage of creative work leads children to their increased productivity.
Secondly, TV advertisements can help children to improve their living styles. There are many ads seen that have children participation. When young children observe the way of children in televisions they find some sense of improving their lifestyle. It can either be way of dressing or speaking. Hence, the advertisements improve their physical appearance.
However, every advantage has some associated disadvantages. It can be justified by taking an example of advertisements presenting expensive video games. It is not always true that whatever is shown in television is always same in reality. The children just considering the benefits of the product as seen on TV can become obstinate. Hence, asking their parents repeatedly to get that product in hands.
Therefore, it can be concluded that TV advertisements can improve children's mental ability and physical lifestyle. But that comes at cost of making them adamant for getting expensive products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...not. As far as my opinion is concerned, i disagree with this idea. There are m...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... seen that have children participation. When young children observe the way of child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38306451613 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07423913838 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9232182856 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.75 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185930179286 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556378371013 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364025657854 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103791765864 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357119009943 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.1575268817 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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