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The speaker claims that most of the mass budget films made today are mere box office collection stunt, which is why the government has to intervene and fund some intellect and thought enhansing films. However, there have been some mass budget films that appeal to the masses in a subtle though effective manner. I strongly agree with the speaker's standpoint. My proclivity towards the same has been justified with relevent examples in the ensuing paragraphs.
The primary reason why I see eye to eye with the spaker is that most of films today invest a ton of money in the starcast and location of shoot and just a handful in story lineup. For example, movies like 'Houseful' spent almost 100 crores on its starcast that consisted of 6 well known movie tycoons. This movie had the sole purpose of entertainment without any effect on the thinking process of the people watching it. Another good illustration is the movie 'Yamla Pagla Diwana' which challenged the human brain in only the downward diretion without a scope of any enlightenment whatsoever. To the surprise of every movie critic these movies earn handsomely in the screens as well making more incentive for the movie producers to do the same in the coming years.
Secondly, I would like to point out that movies like 'Newton' which deal with the fact of the low voter count in many backward region of the nation receive as little as none attention in the box office. Another good example for the same is the award winning movie 'Aligarh' which made its name as the best movie for self awareness in and ot of nation gained little support for the veiwers. The movie was supported by the government to help it promote and gain some limelight in the veiwer market.
On the contrary, some might say that there have been some commercial movies which challenged the though process of the masses in its out way. Movies like 'Ek tha Tiger' which stared the most sensetional movie star of all times Mr. Salman Khan. This movie not just did amazingly in the box office but also unknowingly made people all around the world respect their country's soldiers. Similarly there have been many movies like 'Holiday', 'Tiger zinda hai', etc. which has affected the thought process of masses massively.
Thus in a nutshell, I strongly beleive that the commercial movies if not all but most targetted to masses and hardly seem intellectual. This makes it really necessary for the government to intervene and fund some intellectual movies.
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- argument 16
- argument 16
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in an 41
- movies 70
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'speakers'' or 'speaker's'?
Suggestion: speakers'; speaker's
...ctive manner. I strongly agree with the speakers standpoint. My proclivity towards the s...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
...nother good example for the same is the award winning movie Aligarh which made its name as th...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'promotes'?
Suggestion: promotes
... supported by the government to help it promote and gain some limelight in the veiwer m...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... world respect their countrys soldiers. Similarly there have been many movies like Holida...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...thought process of masses massively. Thus in a nutshell, I strongly beleive that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83058823529 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44264987428 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522352941176 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7734834466 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.052631579 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444553113497 0.243740707755 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152580818137 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13842769456 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254046795276 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160971828163 0.0667264976115 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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