do you agree or disagree? young people now days don't give enough time to helping their community.
Having better society has been always a demanding challenge in many parts of the world. In terms of assisting, it is suggested that junior citizenships have crucial rule for improve and aid of their community. According to what I generally believe, young people pay out suitable time for society; meanwhile, it is also worth mentioning that they are helping to the society by spending time for studding and helping to another people.
The main reason why I believe most people who have range age between 18 until 30 years' old consume sufficient duration for improve their society is because spend most time for studding. To elaborate on my point, since young people spend most time for studding and searching, they can help to improve their society. Therefore, when students who are spending most time in university, they are not only learning new science but also trying solve some problem which they find in the society with doing special project. A significant example that strikes my mind is we can assume master students at university. Major duty of master student is doing special project which it is considered major problem and issue. Hence, they have obligation work to problem 2 or 3 years in order to find scientific and operational solution. They must study carefully, search accurate and examine advertent to find advantage solution.
In addition, I believe that young citizenships have many ways to help their society. This is primarily because of helping another people. If young humans assist another people like poor citizenry, they would improve humanitarian sense in community. Furthermore, owing to helping penniless, junior citizenships can increase indigence in their city where they live. Also, aid to poor people not only means give them amount of currency but also means free education. A quite clear example would be some young people who are teaching in school go to reigns which these areas are underprivileged and teach to the children without give money from them. Therefore, this young people give enough time to improve their society. In addition to, some young doctors cure poor people without give any price from them so that they can improve health of citizens.
To conclude, I generally hold the opinion that youth persons provide abundant times for aid their society they have many ways to assist fore improve and better citizen due to they are trying solve important crucial issues of their society. Another way is, they can help poor people in many ways like afford to free education and cure.
- TPO 19 81
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important way to improve people s health is to clean the environment 90
- TOEFL TPO 45 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book thandoing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07159904535 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50125935893 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505966587112 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7094665718 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227506970741 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813107187623 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725425981329 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148088956152 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623728535313 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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