To be successful at school or at work, we most be creative.
The topic raises the controversial issue of whether one need to be creative so as to get success in different phases of life. Everyone is not creative, are they? But still we have seen people doing success in their life. Different people might have different positions in this topic; however, for me creativeness is key to success. Here, in this essay i am going to write the reasons how creativeness will help to get success in different phases of life.
First of all, creative people comes up with different ideas and thoughts and hence can use one of the best ideas so as improve his businesses or academic performance. Creative people can deal with every kinds of situations using imaginations and different approaches since he can think hundreds of them. As, a paradigm, if a creative person fails in his business with some strategies then will will suddenly come up will another strategy and will try to tackle the situation.But a Conservative person cannot think of anything else either he will be asking help from his advisor or he will end up with nothing else.
Second, creativeness will make people to compete with other and always succeed. This is twenty first century and everyone needs to compete with hundreds of people to get good job, to get success in the businesses and to be success in every sectors. Hence, we can say creativeness is the key factor to success as creative people can deal with any kind of problems and find the possible best solution.
Finally, creative person has varieties of potential. For instance, one of my neighbor had a business and fail on that but today he has one the best TV station in our locality, which is so popular and fantastic. Thus, we can say creative people can do success in different fields. Furthermore, creative people can be happy than a conservative person because most of the creative people are successful and successful people are happy in their life.
In conclusion, taking into account all the points that i have mentioned above,creative people can imagine in broad manner and can get success in various field in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83286908078 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69421688691 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484679665738 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2538605358 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120898937467 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530586986431 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488523761784 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807601987546 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459548386708 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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