Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful?
Please use specific details and examples in your answer.
Nowadays, in this sophisticated world nurturing of children as future makers of society is of great importance, hence family as a first community that a child is part of can be determining factor. So parents as members whose duty is nurturing the kids may different strategies to help their children, While some might strict rules, I disagree with rigid rules. In the fallowing paragraph i will analyze my reasons.
Firstly, strict rules might has adverse effect. Since kids as human has multi dimensional character and the situation also is dynamic, there might be the obeying the rules could be impossible. For example, the child who has to go to bed early before 8 o'clock and get god marks in school, but on the other hand in one case, he has math exam next day that require studying a lot until late at night. Since these two rule interfere with each other so the child wont be successful in his designated tasks.
Secondly, strict rules may leads to emotional crisis. Since when the parents make rigid rules without any forgiveness the child might feel that he is alone and have no support from his family. For example the child has to get good grades in all courses without any asking help from any body, if the poor boy has some problem in learning math questions, he will not only feel lonely, but also his problems won't be solved. This problem surly stay with him for long time
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that parents should avoid from making strict rules. Strict rules not only lead tow adverse effects but also cause emotional problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76071428571 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37750673297 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4524997231 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192103139768 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714824167554 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448151551741 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112076718435 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021235953329 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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