Usage of fossil fuels should be kept in check to protect the environment, so some people say that all the countries must act on an immediate basis. In my opinion, I agree that it is a high time to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels to control global warming and rising pollution levels.
A good reason for the world to keep the usage of fossil fuels in check on an urgent basis is the rising global warming. We are witnessing a gradual increase in the temperature of the earth which has resulted in the melting of glaciers. Freshwater melts and submerges with the ocean resulting in rising ocean levels and, consequently, submerging of many beautiful islands. Further, global warming has resulted in the change of weather. The frequency of storms and floods have increased which in turn results in the damage to human life and capital resources.
In addition to that, extravagant use of fossils has resulted in the problem of pollution for the present generation. Developing nations are facing acute problems of air and water pollution. Pollution has reached to such alarming levels that air is not safe for breathing and water is not safe for drinking. People of such countries are facing health issues and the scarcity of clean resources. It is the responsibility of all the states to support the developing nation with their development by reducing the consumption of fossil fuels.
Finally, the process cycle of turning a fossil to fuels is a million year long. It is a responsibility of present generation to use the fuels with caution to save it for the future generations. They will require the fossil fuels to survive. Also, this responsibility will keep the environment clean and green.
In conclusion, the world must act immediately to put a check on the consumption of fossil fuels as it will result in a better future.
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 89
- More people are spending their free time watching movies, why is this? Is it a good or bad? 67
- Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 100
- Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
- in countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. to what extent do you agree or disagree. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducing the consumption of fossil fuels. Finally, the process cycle of turning a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87539936102 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82047652603 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495207667732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6090426967 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2092648751 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654162932252 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759302507446 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136261531768 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814081785463 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.