The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Nowadays, people’s living standard is higher and higher. As a result, people have to find ways to earn more money to make
ends meet and those who work multiple jobs are increasing in number and they say this is the best way to have more money
and gain knowledge as well. However, I disagree with this idea, we just need to focus on a single job to live on.
To begin with, workers who have a unique career stand a higher chance of getting promotion as they only focus on one
task and one field. As they spend all of their time in a single job, they will obtain specific knowledge in their working field.
The more experience they gain, the further they will get ahead. In the case of multi-job people, it is true that working more
jobs means more experience; however, this knowledge is not specific. Therefore, these workers are not likely to get
promotions and may not earn as much money as those with single career.
Furthermore, having one job allows workers to have further education. Having worked a particular job, they can have
more spare time when they can spend for learning. Further learning is very beneficial for adults in both their careers and
lives. For example, office workers can use their spare time to learn new computer skills to help them increase working productivity, or they can gain many other social skills as well.
To summarize, I advise that we should take a job and focus on it, then you can earn more money and more knowledge in the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Ends
...ind ways to earn more money to make ends meet and those who work multiple jobs a...
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Suggestion:
... this is the best way to have more money and gain knowledge as well. However, I d...
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Suggestion: Task
...promotion as they only focus on one task and one field. As they spend all of the...
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Suggestion: Jobs
...eople, it is true that working more jobs means more experience; however, this kn...
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...ore, these workers are not likely to get promotions and may not earn as much mone...
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Suggestion: Promotions
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Suggestion: More
...ked a particular job, they can have more spare time when they can spend for lear...
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Suggestion: Further,
... time when they can spend for learning. Further learning is very beneficial for adults ...
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...ial for adults in both their careers and lives. For example, office workers can u...
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...or adults in both their careers and lives. For example, office workers can use th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70943396226 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33081116122 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3872149619 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179811153985 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758660803906 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544614131633 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792809376725 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054333298217 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.