Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Children sometimes,can have problems At home. they need to be ...
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...o enlighten their future and their life.The fact that Parents dont have the modern ...
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...re and their life.The fact that Parents dont have the modern method to teach their c...
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...want and can advise and help solve them in best ways which Teachers cant.I feel this wa...
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... solve them in best ways which Teachers cant.I feel this way for two reasons which i...
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...e them in best ways which Teachers cant.I feel this way for two reasons which i w...
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...t.I feel this way for two reasons which i will explore in the following essays. ...
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...n the following essays. To begin with,Sometimes,children can have problems and troubles...
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...children can have problems and troubles.Sometimes,they can be offended and insulted by so...
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...can have problems and troubles.Sometimes,they can be offended and insulted by someone...
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... his children while they are in trouble.For example,When i was born deaf,I was not ...
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...en while they are in trouble.For example,When i was born deaf,I was not happy with be...
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...le they are in trouble.For example,When i was born deaf,I was not happy with bein...
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...trouble.For example,When i was born deaf,I was not happy with being deafness and i...
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...I was not happy with being deafness and i used to think that i couldnt be able to...
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...ing deafness and i used to think that i couldnt be able to fulfill my biggest dream due...
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...ll my biggest dream due to deafness and i had a lot of difficulties learning and ...
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... communicating in a hearing world where i was unfit and acted as a animal and sai...
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...ng world where i was unfit and acted as a animal and said my parents about this a...
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...out this and they understood my weakness,difficulties and dreams and they did their best to a...
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...dreams and they did their best to advise,motivate and encourage me and they learned sign ...
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...sake of my happiness and future so that i realize that i wouldnt have been who i ...
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...ess and future so that i realize that i wouldnt have been who i am today without them. ...
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... i realize that i wouldnt have been who i am today without them. Furthermore,T...
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... i am today without them. Furthermore,The emotions and love between parent and ch...
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...ents have strong bonds with their child.The sacrifices and works parents put on is ...
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... on is something important for children.For example,a mother who wont feel tired of...
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...thing important for children.For example,a mother who wont feel tired of repeating...
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...about their child more than anyone else.Furthermore,Children can learn something new from h...
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... child more than anyone else.Furthermore,Children can learn something new from how parent...
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...rom how parents behave and treat others.Today there are a number of young people who ...
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...e of supportive and hardworking parents.The parents has been large roles in enlight...
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...ive and hardworking parents.The parents has been large roles in enlightening their ...
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...childs future and life. In conclusion,Parents are the one who can always be supportiv...
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... that Parents are the best teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05121293801 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29050571705 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.1344086022 368% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 322.158594484 48.9658058833 658% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.8 100.406767564 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.2 20.6045352989 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 5.45110844103 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115431870995 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748163507433 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547099995529 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921617757517 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458036936149 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 11.7677419355 336% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 58.1214874552 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.1575268817 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.0537634409 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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