There was a time when people only shopped out of necessity but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity. People do not appreciate the value of money anymore.
It is a fact that, nowadays people are doing more shopping compared to the past thus it is developed as a hobby. Many individuals believe that they do not worth the value of money, not all are alike. I will support my stand in forthcoming paragraphs.
At present, the majority of youth started following new fashion trends to maintain their status and superiority in society. They all are keen to dress up with what's trending going on. The market for fashion alters day to day, for getting new clothing and accessory people used to spend a lot of money behind it. In other words, they are throwing money which is quite less important this money could be used over something more beneficial.
Moreover, due to the technological advancements and availability of the internet, E-commercial websites got much widespread, It offers a global platform to purchase international goods, which attracts many customers. Because of, the flexibility it proffer and the various discount schemes many buyers make purchases even though they have no any plans for shopping and it encouraged shopping as a hobby in population.
However, it should also be noted that shopping as a leisure activity remains up to a certain age and it disappears as soon as they start working. A study done on the public from different age groups reveals that It is mainly grown up in youngsters, while the response from the newly employed persons suggested that they were spending money blindly as soon as they realized the worth of every single penny after getting the job.
To conclude, it is undeniable that shopping in free time became routine for many of youth and also not everyone will like materialistic life after a certain age since they get sensible enough to understand the value of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Message: Did you mean 'proffers'?
Suggestion: proffers
...stomers. Because of, the flexibility it proffer and the various discount schemes many b...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...rs make purchases even though they have no any plans for shopping and it encourage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94314381271 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71214157167 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7041665385 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18359368199 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643534827677 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550658401094 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1001819013 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394748909142 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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