An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a positive or negative development for society?
Growing up in a society with fast pace, people quit their jobs and go to another company work consistently. People debate the advantages and disadvantages of this issue to society without reaching an identical result. There are different reasons for this and I would argue that the pros outweigh the potential cons in a certain context.
To begin with, it seems that there are some changes of conceptions. People tend to have a stable life in the past, however it is possible that people want to improve the quantity of their lives now, such as the better welfare, higher income, as well as the more superior occupations. In addition, people tend to have different hobbies and change their minds over the different periods. If they wanted to experience various enterprises culture and refreshing new life and broaden their eyesights, with some interesting minds, they might choose a totaling new job as a result.
Advocates of this trend say that people who always change their jobs may bring more profits for the companies. With the intelligence flow, enterprises might do their best to perfect themselves in order to attract many talents from different fields and industries. On the other hand, companies might develop better if more recruits who possess variety of skills and methods were employed and were able to suppose many innovative minds or regulations from different perspectives. Although some people argue that the society might get unstable because of serious competitions between companies.
In conclusion, I think that the both of society and individuals would be advanced further in the future, although the state of stability might be threatened by the competitions.
- An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a positive or negative development for society? 73
- An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a positive or negative development for society? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76484234719 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3462212292 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245390535102 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879353333108 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548112374072 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134523751833 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763579862473 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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