With the increasing use of mobile phone and computer, the number of people who write letter has decreased. As a result, letter writing will disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree? How do you think letter writing is important？
The progress of technology has been transforming our life since the Industrial Revolution. Besides bringing us time-saving machines, inevitably lead to the extinction of traditional products. For example, it is worried that the letter writing will eventually disappear because of the popularity of mobile phones and computers.
Many people, including me, express concerns for the possibility that technological communications tools replace traditional letter writing for the following reasons. For one thing, it is the truth that computers and cell phones surpass letters in terms of efficiency. Compared with the post mails, which usually take several days or even weeks to arrive at their destinations, e-mails or text messages can be sent and received almost instantaneously. In this fast-paced modern world, such time consuming ways of communication as letters will definitely lose their grounds and be out of the market soon. For another, as citizens can talk through phones and see each other via videos on line, these new means of communications stand out in facilitating people’s emotional exchange and reducing misunderstandings. In comparison, individuals who are not excellent writers will have to struggle in expressing their feelings correctly, which is actually a demanding task for the
majority of people. The result is that their enthusiasm for this traditional mode of interaction is iced.
In spite of this, it is hardly possible to deny the importance of letter writing. In present society, the hustle and bustle of city life deprives citizens of the leisurely and casual mood to enjoy life.They suffer from great pressure from life and work. Letter writing turns out to be an excellent way for them to slow down their pace and attempt to record the beauty of their surroundings. Instead of the cold words, people can have enough time to think about the best word expressions and imagine the warmth and surprise the letter can bring to the receivers. Besides, writing paper mails help us to refine our handwriting, which is more often than not extremely poor as a direct result of the wide application of computers. Also, it has been proved that frequent letter writing improves a person’s ability of concentration. All these culminate in better performance in our study and work.Therefore, it is obvious that the letter writing would perish should no action be taken
to preserve it. It is hoped that the government can work out due measures to revive the conventional way of communications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for one thing, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3042394015 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09838306413 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600997506234 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0580843183 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239254094346 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075605605625 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692709934856 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108850206965 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842244921264 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.