Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?
money problem
earn more money
addictions of drugs and alcohols
Schools ostensible play a crucial role in one's life. Most of the young people quit schools for some reasons and it have a negative impact on their behaviour. This essay discuss about the reason behind it and give some solutions to solve the problem.
To begin with, there are many reasons firstly, poverty is one of the biggest reason, most of the people are not financially strong, they cannot fulfill their family's desires, one of them is education. Take for example, in India there are many rural areas where people do not earn sufficient money, instead people have money to fulfill their rudimentary needs only. Secondly, lack of good teachers in schools is another reason, sometimes teachers behave rude with students which affect them in a negative way. In some schools teachers do not teach students by knowing pupil's psychology, therefore, indirectly forcing them to quit schools at an early age.
On the other hand, there are some solutions through student's attitude towards learning could be improved. Government can open free schools for those students who are unable to pay their fees. Moreover, Government can give scholarships
to pupils to pursue their study and their parents can have less burden. Another solution is teachers should be appointed by complete their teacher training, also, should be graduated in M.ed and B.ed. By holding these degrees teachers can understand the psychology of the scholars and make a good relationship between them.
In conclusion, poverty and lack of the best teachers both are the main reasons that young people leave school at early and do not take interest to learn new things. if government will take these steps and teacher's behave calmly with students then young people's attitude towards learning could be improved definitely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25077399381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53902059438 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9959215911 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2631578947 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209042008357 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682590493665 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414883865355 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138256867811 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290822905437 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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