Topic: More and more people choose to work at home and students study from home as the development of computer technology makes it more convenient and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There is a rise in the number of people and students who prefer working and studying at their houses as a result of the convenience and affordable price currently provided by modern technology devices. While there are many drawbacks existing, I am strongly of the opinion that this trend could be beneficial in various ways.
On the one hand, people and students who choose to stay at home for working and studying because of the convenience and reasonable price provided by computer technology could be negatively affected. The primary reason is that their communication skill would be adversely influenced. As some workers and students spend time for working and studying at home, therefore they might face with a shortage in face-to-face discussions with colleagues which are necessary for completing the ability of communication and critical thinking. Another reason is, the writing skill of these people might have a bad influence as they relied too much on the convenience of technology devices. There are many online tools which automatically correct all grammatical mistakes made by users, consequently, some people would fail to correct themselves when writing physically.
On the other hand, there are numerous obvious benefits of the trend that staying at home for working and studying are becoming common among people and students because of the convenience and low price provided by the development of computer technology. First, computer users are able to access various information sources easily. As the Internet can store a limitless supply of information, therefore Internet-connected computers could help its users gather information even when staying home. Second, these people could save a great amount of money. For example, instead of spending 4 dollars to buy a bus ticket in order to get the local library, university students could find necessary information by searching for it online at home.
To conclude, there are many drawbacks of the trend that more and more people and student have a tendency of working and studying at home as they are utilizing the convenience and affordable price provided by the computer technology development. However, I firmly believe that this trend is positive in various aspects.
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| 2021-06-26 | dhillonsukh | 61 | view |
| 2021-06-26 | Muhammad Hassam Saeed | 56 | view |
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| 2021-06-26 | Muhammad Hassam Saeed | 56 | view |
| 2018-12-29 | tranthutra17 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, second, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34366197183 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9278380535 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487323943662 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5241036815 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317422210517 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102732278063 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111296681106 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201435889791 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793316699328 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.