In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Some countries around the world often time experience a growth in the average obesity rate among individuals, which results in detrimental effects on people when it comes to their overall body shape and well-being. This essay will discuss the common symptoms of such occurrences and shall suggest different ways that can contribute to potentially eliminating the problem.
To begin with, one of the leading causes of over-weight is lack of awareness. Unfortunately, not all governments dedicate enough of their time and resources to inform people of all the possible dangers that can be caused as a result of excessive weight gain. This as a consequence, limits people’s ability to obtain the required education about the issue and frequently results in the development of many other types of diseases which can in many cases endanger one’s life. To illustrate, if a person will not be aware of the food that he is consuming and will not get familiar with the negative consequences that it can give rise to, his well-being will be strongly affected.
To solve this problem, the most obvious way would be to convince the government to offer mandatory classes about the subject and make people enroll from a young age. Such courses need to be offered in schools, universities and even jobs. This would help the government ensure that individuals will be well aware of the subject’s importance and potentially eradicate many possible risks. For example, if a person will engage in the following classes, he will learn that it will be better to cook instead of always buying fast food. This way, he will know what goes into the food and how healthy it is. Furthermore, that will also solve many other problems, including eating and mental disorders and most importantly, will prevent people from gaining redundant weight.
To sum it all up, although many people can be affected by obesity from various different ways, there are available solutions that can be applied to help them educate themselves and therefore, take care of their health.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10059171598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79611313447 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5450497052 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168770517109 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612957387988 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353043241842 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105063247026 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00748672239267 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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