Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is it easy to make decisions? Especially if this is belong to something important in our lives like jobs, study, and social? When I was young I was completely depend on my parents to make decision instead of me in contrast, my daughter is completely independent in her decisions. Why? For several reasons.
First, Teachers today explain and teach kids since elementary school how to be independent in decision making and to be responsible on it and this continue till the student attend the collage. or instance my daughter make decision to attend drama club every Tuesday and she tell her teacher about her passion about theaters and I just sign her paper for admission in contrast, when I was in her age I can’t even make any simple decision like if I want to attend any extra classes without ask my mom. This because in our school always never teach us how to be independent and never build our personalities.
Moreover, young people today try to take their own finance responsibility because they need more money to support their study which it’s hard to their parents to provide it. Plus, their needs became more specially with sustained advent of technology as new version of phones and laptop be available in high prices while in past our parents take the whole responsibility to cover our needs. This in turn, affects our decisions make. My nephew is a good example of this, he starts work as front disk in company in Washington DC and he take the metro every day for his work and then for his collage this makes him more independent person and take on his shoulders all the responsibility for decisions making according to his work and study.
In sum, I personally believe today young people are more able to take their own decision than in the past because they have been teaches how to be independent in their lives and because they are work beside their study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...o make decisions? Especially if this is belong to something important in our lives lik...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...cial? When I was young I was completely depend on my parents to make decision instead ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ue till the student attend the collage. or instance my daughter make decision to ...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end the collage. or instance my daughter make decision to attend drama club every...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
...attend drama club every Tuesday and she tell her teacher about her passion about the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... even make any simple decision like if I want to attend any extra classes without...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bility to cover our needs. This in turn, affects our decisions make. My nephew is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a good example of this, he starts work as front disk in company in Washington D...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...disk in company in Washington DC and he take the metro every day for his work and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60168766305 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8386955022 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297116438078 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117549674208 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772685501492 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191382606998 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048586944202 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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