Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Family bond is come in priority for every person. The relation that connect the children with their parents play a pivotal role in their family relation which in turn, effect the society as a whole. As much as the parents spend more time with their kids will positively effect the children psychologically, emotionaly, andtheir productivity. It's better to use this relation in somthing useful for their kids that can have a broad aspects on their future and schoolwork is one of these activities.
Many of our children are struggling when they have projects to be done and its good for them to know that they can seek help from their parents. This will enhance their performance and will be proud of themselves which will build a sense of proudness for their achivemnet. My daughter is a good example of this, when she struglle with her project for several days she ask my help and i give her my words to do it in my spare time and when we start to work on her project we finished it faster than we thought and she rewarded for this by her school's principle and put her name on the board in the school's hall. She told me she was never be happy than spend this time work with me on somthing useful instead of playing .
In addition, this project learn my kids how to be organized in her life. My daughter ever been unorganize person since i'm always busy to learn her how she can schedual her time to achieve her higher goals. This can be achieved when together do some schoolwork rather than playing games. When we work on this same project I ask her to return everytrhing we use to its place. Sissor, papers, coloring pencils etc. she clean her room after and this will give her a good impression about how it's important to work with me in useful things.
In sum, i personaly believe its important to work with our kids on shoolwork this will in future gethered the relation with their parents and help them to be more dependently responsiblre persons.
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...e schoolwork rather than playing games. When we work on this same project I ask her ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5395480226 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44184898448 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471751412429 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2453287634 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 5.45110844103 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220273066503 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824720428947 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603095752167 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149721082111 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056455258385 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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