You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the Bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you
would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to clarify on a recent transaction in which $240 is overdrawn and the bank will be charging $70 as a penalty which will be taken directly from my account. As you are aware that I am holding a saving bank account with ANZ bank for the past fifteen years and I can say that it has been a privilege to be your customer.
However last week I went to the banking kiosk to withdraw money and instead of debiting $240 from my account only once, the money was debited twice. I informed customer care immediately of this transaction and they assured to have taken note of my request and advised that the money will be credited back into my account within 48 hours as it was due to the faulty banking kiosk.
Hence I would request you give an explanation and help to resolve this matter and credit back $240 in my bank account immediately.
I look forward to your immediate resolution on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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| 2019-01-04 | vinshu koul | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...was due to the faulty banking kiosk. Hence I would request you give an explanation...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o resolve this matter and credit back 40 in my bank account immediately. I loo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43172685467 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1335671466 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484364875605 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181124386585 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114545503554 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24599405608 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177875154552 0.056905535591 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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