Recently, the phenomenon of introducing various offers and discounts from big companies and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this common marketing strategy cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that these strategies can be plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support using diverse suggestions and discounts as a strategy for companies. At first, the biggest disadvantage with decreasing the price of a product is gaining a lower profit for the company. However, the cheapest crops could increase the rates of sales. For example, selling the products in a lower percentage of can enhance the majority of customers to purchase the product.
In addition, the products in a lower price of before may endanger the reputation of a company. But, the companies can sale accumulated products and introduce a new product. For instance, recent marketing research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that famous companies use discounts to attract buyers to introduce their new products.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the beneficial influences of these strategies on companies' reputation far outweighed their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51131221719 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06283706808 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8514536282 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249930342869 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838312902661 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571488611285 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133836285313 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417738423972 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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