people are more satisfied of doing different tasks in one workday rather than one task. do you agree or disagree?
One of the most argumentative question among company owners is whether their staff and worker should do one task all the day or have many different type of task during one day. Nowadays most of people work five days per week and each day eight hours. Undoubtedly they get bored every day. Some companies ask their worker to do different tasks in day and some others think apposite. I am of the opinion saying worker should have different task during the workday. I what follows, I will cogently delve to my conspicuous reasons in order to justify my stand points.
Firstly, the most important reason which is worth being taken an account is that without any doubt when people do something in long run they get bored. Getting bored diminish their efficiency. According to conducted studies in German, researcher divided people in two groups.one group was told to pill orange for eight hours. The other group was asked to pill cucumber, pomegranate, orange and apple for the same time. Not only has the study shown that people with different fruits had more efficiency also get bored less that the single fruit group.
Secondly, another pivotal reason which is worth being explained is that people who do the same things for a while, they don't pay attention to what they are doing. With a little bit exaggeration, they do their job with close eyes, and it can be dangerous sometime. Consider an industry machine operator who regularly put the steel sheet under high pressure. If he not pay attention to his work and make a mistake, without any hesitate he will get his hand crushed.
To wrap it up, contemplation aforementioned reasons above, one can effortlessly conclude that worker are more satisfied when they have many different types of task during one work day. Part of this is because people get bored less and the other part is related to their physical health condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... should do one task all the day or have many different type of task during one day. Nowadays m...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...t type of task during one day. Nowadays most of people work five days per week and each day ei...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ho do the same things for a while, they dont pay attention to what they are doing. W...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ttention to what they are doing. With a little bit exaggeration, they do their job with cl...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...orker are more satisfied when they have many different types of task during one work day. Part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83281733746 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4646724179 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1752941008 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8235294118 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258030141925 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732350284708 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911574096654 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152598514878 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083057700668 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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