You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing to inform you that I have recently moved from Downtown Street to 15 Arthur Street.
To elucidate the reason for my move to a new apartment was due to a plethora of reasons but the preponderant one being the lack of facilities like Parking, Swimming pool, Gymnasium and recreational club moreover the earlier accommodation was located far away from my office and hence I had to spend a lot of time in travelling.
The new apartment I am staying in is in a posh high-rise building at the centre of the city. It consists of two bedrooms and each bedroom has high tainted glass windows which provide a panoramic view of the beautiful gardens outside. On the other hand, society is well equipped with all the modern facilities like parking, swimming pool, Sauna, Security and a health club.
Why don't you come and plan a visit this weekend on Saturday?. I am inviting all my college friends for a house-warming party. I can promise you that it will be great fun and you will enjoy.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Derick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...una, Security and a health club. Why dont you come and plan a visit this weekend ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ill be great fun and you will enjoy. I look forward to seeing you soon. Warm ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57352941176 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58839775931 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2137335844 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200845856194 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698296132278 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651004309275 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105515535906 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801765059497 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.