Some people believe that internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and community are become isolated.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are divided in their views of whether internet has made individuals more separated from societies and communities or brought them more closers. In my opinion internet has really deserted them from each other.
Admittedly, due to the invention of technology people can stay in touch, wherever they are. The modem software applications, such as, face book, whatsapp and instagram has made everyone’s life more social. As a result they feel like they are more connected, despite the fact in reality that, they are not meeting in person. Moreover with the help of internet, they can post their status, photos and images, which will enable their social circle, to know more about them. This feeling give them a sense of satisfaction for being in the community.
On the other hand, some people believe and I agree, that although, heaving a lot of friends over Social Media, they hardly do any face-to-face interaction with each other, which is a vital trait for building a strong relationship or being a part of any community. Having a lot of friends over Face book or Twitter does not always mean a live interaction with everyone. As we know to build a concrete relationship personal meeting with individuals is absolutely necessary. Furthermore instead of staying in touch with community, people prefer to have online relationship which will further deteriorate the situation. For example one of my cousins, wished happy birthday to one of his friend last year on Face book, and this year his friend did the same with him on his birthday.
In conclusion, although internet has made social connection among people much easier, I still believe because of diminished personal touch with people, the internet t has made individuals and community Isolated from each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13356164384 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76319358492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4138811567 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169379273429 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630918057379 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661620549428 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127482961984 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634758629741 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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