A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

I refute the concept of a national level curriculum at the pre-college level, primarily on three grounds. First, a national level curriculum by the virtue of being a national level entity becomes too rigid and in its attempts to be exhaustive ceases to be useful. Second, it limits the scope of ambition of the students. And thirdly, the condition of the students who are left behind becomes dire.

A national level curriculum at school level would induce apathy if not antipathy for education the students receive since the curriculum would cover a range of topics including or maybe excluding the topic of their interest. It is by its nature required to cover the basics of most of the primary level education covering a and thus should be such that it caters to the nationwide student body. This implies that in a country which is as large and diverse as the Amazon forests and similar to the forest bears distinct and unique organisms if it one day decides to teach all its animals the same curriculum we would have fishes climbing trees and monkeys learning to fly. At the national level, the correlation might not be as evident if the number of affected students is small, imagine now that the same happens to the majority. If there comes a time that the correlation is visible, it would already be too late. In terms of economic factors, this will be apparent by the declining employment rate.

Furthermore, given the rigid structure of the national level curriculum students are left with very few options when considering their interests. To elaborate the point, a student who has been exposed to the subjects limited to mathematics, sciences and arts will be disposed to think that she or he is supposed to like one of the above subjects only, thereby not only will their education be limited the scope of their ambition will also be limited.

Also, consider the student who cannot fit in with the national level curriculum, it will in her or his formative year learn to associate herself or himself with diffidence and a feeling of inferiority. Students in school are in the early formative years of their life. This age is a very impressional time for them, the vices they learn at this stage would likely stay with them perpetually. The above two points illustrate the importance of individual-level cognitive grooming, rather than brute force "studying".

With the recent development of cognitive science in the education sector, new innovative methodologies of teaching at the student level are emerging. The new world education ensures that no student is left out and that they learn at their own pace. Given the emergence and slowly establishing the dominance of education at the individual level, it becomes evident that a common gross level curriculum cannot sustain itself for long.

Despite its shortcomings, a national level curriculum facilitates many other nuances. Having travelled a lot in my school days, I had come to appreciate the national curriculum since otherwise each transfer would have meant starting the complete "learning" process all over. Also, it gives a common platform to the students of different states to interact. Nevertheless, its disadvantages far exceed its transitory advantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, thirdly, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2730.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09328358209 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93280496357 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501865671642 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 882.0 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1535133957 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.695652174 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3043478261 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26195132306 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771554911093 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559952560566 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142242400941 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591224848295 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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