The chart shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York city between 1995 and 2000

Essay topics:

The chart shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York city between 1995 and 2000

The bar chart gives information about quantity of airports visitors through three major airports in New York City. It covers data about 6 years of using airports from 1995 to 2000.
Each airports were had more passengers year by year to 1997 year. Only John F. Kennedy had stagnation in number of passengers in the next years. Both of LaGuardia and Newark kept upward trend. Overall trend was demonstrated with intensive increase.
Looking at details, John F. Kennedy airport had 26 millions of passengers in 1995 but there is marked difference in number of passengers who travelled via this airport in 2000, their quantity was presented in 45 millions. LaGuardia was the most popular in 1995 with 35 millions of passengers and kept a leader position in 2000, but with 67, millions of passenger yet. There is reversed situation with Newark which was the most unvisited in 1996 with 26 millions of passengers and stayed unvisited until 2000 year but with 42 millions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...rs of using airports from 1995 to 2000. Each airports were had more passengers year ...
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Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'passengers'' or 'passenger's'?
Suggestion: passengers'; passenger's
...5 to 2000. Each airports were had more passengers year by year to 1997 year. Only John F....
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '26 million'.
Suggestion: 26 million
...at details, John F. Kennedy airport had 26 millions of passengers in 1995 but there is marked ...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '35 million'.
Suggestion: 35 million
...ardia was the most popular in 1995 with 35 millions of passengers and kept a leader position i...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '26 million'.
Suggestion: 26 million
...ich was the most unvisited in 1996 with 26 millions of passengers and stayed unvisited until 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95705521472 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59064289601 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.302899827 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226388849924 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800860493919 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100699028381 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176690212868 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140491642115 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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