A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in regards to remind you of a suitcase which you borrowed from me.
I believe you borrowed the suitcase last year as you were planning for a short trip to Bangkok. To elucidate the suitcase is blue in colour and is made of carbon fibre which makes it very light while travelling. It has travel stickers all over it which make it look attractive additionally it has shining robust steel handles which differentiate it from the other suitcases. I hope the suitcase served you well during your vacation due to its large capacity.
As you are aware that I am travelling to Indonesia next month along with Jane and I would need the suitcase to carry my items apart from this the suitcase is airline checkable so that would save us from a lot of unnecessary hassles at the airport.
Why don't you pay a visit next week to return the suitcase and it will be a great opportunity to meet your wife too?.
I look forward to your response.
Yours loving
Danny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ng time since we last met. I am writing in regards to remind you of a suitcase which you borr...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
...o Bangkok. To elucidate the suitcase is blue in colour and is made of carbon fibre which makes...
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Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ecessary hassles at the airport. Why dont you pay a visit next week to return the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, apart from, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51041666667 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43934670074 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2662334382 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172348756985 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654843246239 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601425517726 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888519399532 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591898233725 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.