Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them?
Friends are essential for having a better life. Whether do a person study from his or her friends easily? To me, I agree with the statement that people easily learn from the friends beside them because of the following reasons.
First, people tend to receive friends’ influences. To be concise, friends have great influences to a person and people spontaneously behave as the person who they admire. Generally, everybody makes friends with other person who has some features or characteristics that he or she likes. Accordingly, people will spontaneously imitate the friends’ behaviors. Also, environment is a very important factor for a student. If most of his or her friends are diligent, he or she would learn from them and become diligent. By contrast, if the friends do not think studying is important, he or she also would be affected by them and copy them. Hence, people easily learn from their friends and will have the same attitudes toward many things.
Second, interacting with friends can learn teamwork skills. Only by interacting with friends can people learn how to teamwork efficiently. Teamwork abilities are indispensable in companies because they want to improve work efficiency through cooperation. Thus, teachers occasionally let students have group projects with their friends and provide opportunities to teamwork. Through discussing with friends or separating responsibilities with group members, people can learn and enhance their cooperation abilities. Encouraging and covering each other in the group, certainly will improve the work efficiency.
Thirdly, similar people naturally become friends and teach each other. Baseball players will gather in baseball court, and smokers smoke in a smoking room. It is very natural that people have the same preference will gather and form a group. In the group, members will teach each other about their preference. For example, smokers might recommend high-quality cigarettes to their friends. Also, baseball players improve their skills from advice from teammates. People generally have their group and there are more opportunities to learn from friends who have the same preference.
Undeniably, some might think that people are not susceptible to friends’ behaviors. However, I have the opposite opinion. I think many things cannot learn without friends. Hence, I agree with the statement that people can easily learn from their friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52673796791 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88237898453 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475935828877 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.726768474 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8214285714 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410171849382 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119828018141 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117417738047 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279377062341 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144821536767 0.0645574589148 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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