Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today's society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
While some people claim that computers are such the obstacles, others consider this device as the essentials in life. I agree that people can take advantage of computers because of their benefits. This essay will firstly discuss how computers how computers prevent people from outdoor activities, secondly address how success they bring in different fields.
On the one hand, if all the public use computer everyday, that would easily get both physical and mental disease. Furthermore, sitting in front of screen harms not only user’s eyes but also their mind, as they stop participating extra-curricular activities complete personal work on computer. I totally agree that prolonged of computer severely affects the development of children especially because this automatic machine does not require using hands and logical thinking to solve the problems instead of a click. For example, many surveys show that a majority of adolescents get a short-sighted eye since elementary school, and some face with obesity due to lacking of physical activities.
On the other hand, computers are considered as a personal assistant for work and entertainment due to their advantages. Eventually, they could boost the working process effectively such as transferring materials fast to gain the best result. And then, they become a great device to entertain in leisure time. I believe that technology will be more develop to support people and decrease burdens in reality. For instance, library was the main source to absorb knowledge previously whereas nowadays computers offer a huge range of information in various areas.
In conclusion, despite some drawbacks that computers could harm for humans, there are some advantages in work and entertainment improving people’s life. In my opinion, the huge benefit of computers is irreplaceable for human beings in modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'how computers'.
Suggestion: how computers
...nefits. This essay will firstly discuss how computers how computers prevent people from outdoor activities,...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ne hand, if all the public use computer everyday, that would easily get both physical an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50173010381 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94810500836 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2942197044 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237371022685 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789942917497 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357795192602 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140935603525 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316618431794 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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