When it comes to travel everyone is different. some people feel that traveling alone is better so they can be own their one and that a companion might hold them back. Others believe that it adds a lot to the trip by going along with some good company, and I am definitely one of those who enjoys a good company when traveling around.
First of all, for me, I feel that going sightseeing with my friends is very enjoyable. even a short weekend trip can be really fun when I travel with my best friends. Because I consider my self a very social person, I would be really bored going to explore a new place by my self. I would need a friend to share the excitement with, not to mention, I can not even go for dinner by my self in my local city. therefore, there is no way to I would enjoy eating alone on my travel time. another important reason is that I believe making trips with your friends can take the relationship to a whole new level. spending that quality time with my friends will help us become closer and the memories we make will last forever.
Second, traveling with a companion can save a lot of many. As sharing the cost of accommodation and meals is much more affordable than traveling own your own. On a personal experience, I went on a trip to Las Vegas a few years ago with my two best friends. Not only we had a lot of fun time together but we saved alot of money by sharing the cost of everything. We road together in one car so we saved a lot on gas, we shared one hotel room which was very reasonable to pay, and we share the cost of the meals and entertainment bills as we took advantage of the deals and promotions they offer for a party of three or more.
In conclusion, traveling with good friends can make the trip a lot more enjoyable, rememberable, and definitely much more affordable than traveling solo.
- If you could have any job you wanted, what would you choose? Give the reasons why this is your dream job. 70
- If you could have any job you wanted, what would you choose? Give the reasons why this is your dream job. 70
- Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice (from the Official TOEFL Guide). 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Some
... comes to travel everyone is different. some people feel that traveling alone is bet...
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...eing with my friends is very enjoyable. even a short weekend trip can be really fun ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...for dinner by my self in my local city. therefore, there is no way to I would enjoy eati...
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... by my self in my local city. therefore, there is no way to I would enjoy eating ...
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Suggestion:
...he memories we make will last forever. Second, traveling with a companion can s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29022988506 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49090530961 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502873563218 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6402611013 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150299926355 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061875932485 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460575346654 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107297790883 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444294687894 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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