Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When it comes to college educations, there must be a constant flow of budget to improve and elevate the education facilities. One important part of any education system is the professors and the solid base of any prestigious university. Therefore, I would strongly agree that professors should earn high salaries.
To start with, professors are a fundamental part of any school system. In order for the faculty member to give the best they can toward the students, they must get a decent income to be encouraged to give their best effort. Another important point is that when future or potential professors are promised to earn a high salary they would always work hard for their degree and qualifications, they will invest time and effort to go through continuous educational classes, conduct in researches, and any kind of activities that will guarantee them a good decent job and enough income. On the other hand, when a school is paying minimum salaries to its faculty members, the outcome will be minimum educational giving and of course, much less of a spirt from the professors as they only want to do what they must do to keep a job. That certainly will not improve any university system.
Moreover, when a good school offers high salaries to its professors, that will definitely attract highly qualified professors to join their faculty. The university will get many potential faculty applicants which will make this competition very beneficial for the school, students and of course the professors themselves. One example I can demonstrate on this point is when my mother was applying for a faculty member job in a well-known college. She was interested more in this college precisely because of its high income and the good benefits they offer. However; they need certain certificates and a high degree in some exams. This made my mother work so hard to earn those degrees needed in order for her to be considered. Eventually, she got the job and everybody wins!
To sum up, high professors salaries are very important to keep the school at a good level. It comes naturally that The more you give the more you will receive.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, of course, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91160220994 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7348680165 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5518904858 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796515815648 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338249942442 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035576401289 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540711609248 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00917011960221 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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