You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Hi Nidhi,
I hope this letter find you and your family well. You will be surprised to know that I am leaving the job to pursue masters at the university of Toronto. Meanwhile I am coming back to Nagpur. I want to meet all my childhood friends including you.
I had planned for mastered since a long but due to other financial obligations, I could not pursue the same hence now I am quitting my job and going to live my dream.
This degree is a three years program, I have already enquired about all the expenses like fees, accommodation and other expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part time job along with my studies.
I am serving 60 days <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">notice </span>period which is mandatory to serve. It will be completed on next week i.e. march 7, 2019. I have booked the ticket for Nagpur. I will start on march 9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school and cricket ground as well. I am sure we are going to have a great time.
Looking forward to meet you all.
See you soon.
Bye
Namrata
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Nidhi, I hope this letter find you and your fam...
^^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...e masters at the university of Toronto. Meanwhile I am coming back to Nagpur. I want to m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting my job and going to live my dream. This degree is a three years program, I ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd other expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part time job along...
^^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...her expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part time job along with...
^^^^
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... some savings. Also have a plan to do a part time job along with my studies. I am serv...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a part time job along with my studies. I am serving 60 days ^^^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ize: 19.36px;'>notice period which is mandatory to serve. It will be ...
^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Nagpur. I will start on march 9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old...
^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my pla...
^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'gather'
Suggestion: gather
... for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school and cricket groun...
^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...to have a great time. Looking forward to meet you all. See you soon. Bye Namr...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to meet you all. See you soon. Bye Namrata
^^^
Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u all. See you soon. Bye Namrata
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42307692308 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91198553625 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.457015252 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1111111111 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23523583243 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066899566038 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640574800666 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126179687622 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109741538919 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.17 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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