Most government money should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is vital for national and territory leaders to provide priority assistance for educate science outweigh the rest of discipline in term of finance; thereby, the country would witness the dramatically upsurge. Personal judging, a sharp agreement is my point of view, which is clarify by evidence and information in my essay.
Firstly, science is by far conceded as the most crucial and compulsory course of the curriculum all over the world as several rationales. In detail, science is classified into two fields: natural science and social science so that studying science could provide student the foundation of basic knowledge in all aspects of life. Furthermore, analysing and processing ability, which is highly appreciated in modern era requiring superiority citizen, can be enhance. Nowadays, the majority of reputed university's entrance exam tests would contain a significant number of scientific questions.
Secondly, science spirit instruct human to have various recommended virtues. One of that is creative, student would inspire by the numerous of historical inventions so that they could come up with an idea to do a research or manufacture an incredible machine in order to optimize human’s living standard. Moreover, critical thinking, which help people sharpen their own standpoint, is the most enormous benefit that given by learning science efficiently.
To conclude, profound impacts on educational development by concentrating on teaching science show sharp advantages when comparing to other courses so that scientific involvement could be one of the exclusive key contributing in the skyrocket of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'clarified'.
Suggestion: clarified
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64919354839 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05848036764 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5090818121 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.1 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152746782712 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500899085906 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355940756779 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857164210686 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167947885655 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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