Essay topics: You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say
-describe what you left and where it happened
-why are these papers important
-what would you like the manager to do about it
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to inform you of an incident in which I forgot my official documents while boarding a taxi from your fleet.
To elucidate the incident took place yesterday when I boarded a taxi from North Sims Avenue to Airport as I
had to catch the flight to Malaysia but when I reached airport I suddenly realized that I had forgotten the file in the taxi. The taxi number for your reference is SDG456896. The file which I forgot is blue in colour with transparent cover and a name sticker additionally it has some confidential documents like the memorandum of understanding, Non-disclosure agreements which are critical for some business transactions of my company.
Thus I would request you to send these document to my mailing address which you will find on the name sticker on the file. I hope you can send these documents immediately as I need to send these
papers to my legal department for verification.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to inform you of an incident in which I fo...
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Line 6, column 203, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
...s SDG456896. The file which I forgot is blue in colour with transparent cover and a name stick...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...business transactions of my company. Thus I would request you to send these docum...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87078651685 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89748790891 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9173024729 44.8134815571 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205068009569 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835514684923 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060423687381 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903551938349 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769943035021 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.