Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing fine?. it has been a long time since we last met. I wanted to let you know that I have recently moved to a new house, as the previous flat was in the suburbs of the city. Though it was much better to live in the suburbs, you could enjoy the peace and tranquillity but commutation was a problem. I had to travel every day like a few hours to reach my office and the market was also inaccessible.
The new house I have moved is an apartment in a high-rise condominium, it is a studio and offers all the modern amenities like 24 hours security, a club with facilities like squash, table-tennis, indoor swimming pool and with state of the art gymnasium. The best part is that it is strategically located in the city centre and near to my office which reduces travelling time.
To celebrate this, I am throwing a housewarming party this Saturday and you must come. I am sure when you visit you will find the new place amazing. I have also invited my college buddies and I promise it will be great fun.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing fine?. it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...e-tennis, indoor swimming pool and with state of the art gymnasium. The best part is that it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40886699507 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55403398888 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4729048601 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15019201484 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470604254842 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433877387415 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825898047808 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318407455169 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.