High sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.
It is argued by some that the voracious appetite of societies for consumer goods is but an elusive urge created by the mesmerizing quality of advertisement. There is, in my view, strong evidence to prove the veracity of such an opinion.
Firstly, the influence of ballyhoos on the collective subconscious mind cannot be denied. Once human mind is suggested with peripheral perception simultaneously doing activities, the information is printed adhesively on the subconscious, and it ultimately appears on the surface as an illusion of freedom of choice. By way of illustration, while watching a favorite sitcom on TV, the product appeared on the screen is capable of being associated with the joyance and laughter of a certain hilarious scene.
Secondly, some popular products are of no doubt harmful to the consumers' health. Despite having been proven to be extremely perilous, certain consumer goods are sold on massive scales. Taking cigarettes as an example, while a smoke addict is, to some extent, aware of the potential harm, he keeps indulging since ads suggest it as a way of pleasure.
Finally, advertisers manipulate human psychological complexes and inferiority complex on the top. Being born with an inherent feeling of inferiority and position anxiety, human beings seek a set of goods and behaviors as symbols of their belongings to a higher class. And that is the fertile soil into which advertisers implant the seeds of their inception by introducing a product as a sign of prosperity and superiority.
In conclusion, I am absolutely convinced that the sheer scale of consumer goods sales indicates the success of advertising companies as puppet masters of minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...products are of no doubt harmful to the consumers health. Despite having been proven to b...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g companies as puppet masters of minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24814814815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08578981226 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6583782016 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155700491618 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540261651726 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558922349622 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856799684049 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506401502175 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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