Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
when people have to live outside their country and communicate in different language, sometimes may lead to social and other problems. In my opinion, I disagree that speak in different language will bring to any serious problem as there are many ways to help you to communicate well with others.
On the one hands, It may difficult to many people when you are living abroad and surround by foreign people. language is the importance tool for our communication. people may feel difficult if they cannot speak well with others. For example, people cannot express their thoughts to other very well when they have to speak with other language. this could cause people to get misunderstanding as well as lose confidence for making friend which could possible lead to social problem. However, I do believe that there are many possible ways to help people improve their language.
On the other hands, We are living in the modern world where things are more openness. there are many ways to help people get use to different social and things where they live from their hometown. For instance, people can go to church on sunday to meet people and share the interesting topics. this can help people to have a good communication skill and make new friend. In addition, once you get use to all environment so people can adjust your self to its society very well. Not only society improvement, but also in other ways such as adaptability and can do practical task.
In conclusion, living in the different country where people have to use difference language lead people to have diversity friend in stead of casing serious social problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89891696751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56343619983 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490974729242 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6498902929 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275244341401 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096383944067 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493623553044 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190621911582 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045046246939 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.