Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, museums are gradually getting more attention of human. Resulting in two opposite opinions, some people consider museums as comfortable places to entertain them, whereas the rest think the ultimate purpose of museums is teach people. I my opinion, i side with the view that museums are a great way to learn and to be educated. This essay will discuss those two views.
On the one hand, according to the former thought, people in this group believe that the aim of museums is recreation. In this contemporary life, people are attracted by fascinating things, such as breath-taking sceneries, critically acclaimed artworks, ... And museums is the place where those things usually take place. Museums are one of the most appealing and beneficial ways for residents to witness a host of nice historical and ancient things, not only allow for adults but also for children to take part in. Visiting museums gives everybody an advantage of watching ancient movies about a range of hictorical events and many brave figures back in the day.
On the other hand, with regard to education, by going to the museums, by getting to know our countries with an assortment of hictorical issues and ancient figures in a deeper and touching way, we can experience a trip that hark back to the past centuries, we may feel more proud of our ascestors and forefathers who had kept the countries independent. It can enhance our care towards sacrifices of many strong fighters and warriors. Museums are not only used for demonstration purpose but also for teaching human beings, teaching via photographs, movies, figures, forefathers, help people to gain more their knowledge about their own history, encourage students to learn history eagerly and actively.
In conclusion, i tend to gravitatate towards the use of education of museums. Going to museums, in general, does wonders for your knowledge and your pride to your nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, in conclusion, in general, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74447069173 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4759222281 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27325030539 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873864177654 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818842073871 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152465071294 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106444586501 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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