Nowadays, passion trending towards tourism in catastrophic climates. A last year survey on tourism perplexed everyone that explorers to varied climatic condition places raised their number in scale very high which clearly shows the enthusiasm in tourists. These days, many travel agencies are coming up with their plans to Sahara desert or the Antarctic on demand basis.
There are advantages as well as disadvantages exploring such peculiar places. Some demographics states that frequently visiting those places by numerous people causes environmental damage as they would be throwing all the garbage which harms the living habitats at that place. The main intention of tourists would be exploring different places and examining species, during the examination some of the dangerous living-beings may cause harm which in result causes deaths as there wont be a proper medication or care to be taken. As it leads to adverse ramification of ones health.
The other side of the coin is advantages, the positives are very less when compared to the negatives. The visitors gets elevates to new places and enjoy the pleasure. The air and the water will be so pure that there wont be any pollution if its Antarctic.
In Sahara dessert is full of sand and there will be water a scarcity, if any sightseer is willing to go they have to carry water and they cant extend their trip if they are willing to do so.
Keeping all the plus and minuses aside, we can explore and fell the pleasure of that places if and only if your causing any harm to concerned environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
...such peculiar places. Some demographics states that frequently visiting those places b...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...amining species, during the examination some of the dangerous living-beings may cause harm ...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... proper medication or care to be taken. As it leads to adverse ramification of one...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... As it leads to adverse ramification of ones health. The other side of the coin i...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'get'.
Suggestion: get
...compared to the negatives. The visitors gets elevates to new places and enjoy the pl...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to new places and enjoy the pleasure. The air and the water will be so pure that ...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to go they have to carry water and they cant extend their trip if they are willing t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore and fell the pleasure of that places if and only if your causing any harm to ...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...pleasure of that places if and only if your causing any harm to concerned environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01145038168 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68292376871 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4277360011 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141096194282 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463390895355 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419974609271 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617940955472 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419286608431 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.