In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
There have been arguments over the impacts that watching sport on television might in the youth. Although, there is some truth to the belief that it may cause the drawback in the sport engagement of common folk, in my point of view following matches of the beloved team or player has far more advantages.
To begin with, there are several reasons why some validate watching sport on television as the reason of youngsters ignore sports activities. Young people have passions for numbers sports, as there are many channels, which broadcast non-stop recent sporting events, but they hardly participate in outdoor sports themselves. To compound, it encourages them to play video gaming consoles and parents are the ones who are liable for this degradation, since they purchase these devices for their offsprings. Thus, on this perspective, watching sport games lead to the deterioration of well-being not only in children, but adults may suffer as well.
By contrast, being surrounded by sport competitions induces the eager to do certain activities. The human nature is established in such way that whatever makes the person inspired, this activity, the one is likely to do more frequently. To illustrate this, if a kid observes the outstanding performance of the favorite sportsman and gets fascination, this will drive him/her to repeat the movements of the professional, thereby making a child engaged with physical activity. Another benefit of watching could be the chance to spend the time with those, who are also enthusiastic about the industry, by reinforcing the relationships and challenging each other to get the eligible body and shape. Therefore, it is essential to follow the sport events to have the motivation to evolve by corresponding to the professionals.
From the given points, I firmly believe that if we watch sport and talk about it, we would tout the lifestyle and even encourage uninterested part of the population to take the responsibility of their health from the very early ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18769230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92663750755 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636923076923 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3157295528 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250762115585 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079003972593 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454236600856 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134921484327 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396522843129 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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