The historical building in your place is in bad condition. Write to the local government. In your letter
Why the building is important
what is the present condition
what actions must be taken
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your attention about an old library which is considered as one of the historical monument. It represents the symbol of our historic tradition and culture of our country. More over it’s the only library which was inaugurated by Queen Victoria in India.
As the building has not gone through any maintenance from last two decades, it is now under devastating condition. Even though pillars of the building are still strong, we can see fissures on the walls and roofs of the building. Although it looks like rock steady externally, the internal strength and paint is deteriorated.
This is the only library in the vicinity of the city; as a result it is always crowded by young enthusiastic readers. So, I would request you to take immediate actions by renovating this building as soon as possible to prevent any catastrophic incidents at the library.
I look forward for your quick and prompt response.
Yours faithfully
SHAM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... catastrophic incidents at the library. I look forward for your quick and prompt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, still, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04848484848 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80695711839 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6903170589 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186930688574 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629020622735 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506985589329 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856020522087 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169135018194 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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