Dear Mr. Bond,
I am a student of "Advanced Artificial Intelligence", a part-time course in your prominent university. I am writing to draw your attention to my dissatisfaction as a student.
I have joined the batch of the year 2018, and concurrently working as a Senior Software Engineer in a multinational company. The main force behind joining the course is to enhance my skills in the area. Although, I am aware of the fundamentals of Robotics, knowledge of Artificial Intelligence is beyond that, and a vital for the further improvement in robotic technology. As I am so passionate to learn this course, I am not feeling the same from your perspective to deliver the same. Due to five day working schedule, most of the students take weekend classes, and to our surprise, all the time the staff stays unavailable because of some reason. Moreover, the practical classes are pathetic, systems are broken and no internet connection is there.
I am requesting you to please provide at least a suitable environment to students who aspire more for their future, pass stringent rules for teachers attendance as well. It would be great if new systems could be arranged for lab purpose with advanced equipment. We have paid a huge fee for the course and we deserve to get the knowledge, for which, we came here.
Hope to get an optimistic prompt action from you.
Your Sincerely,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to my dissatisfaction as a student. I have joined the batch of the year 2018,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9829787234 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14007955195 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8584328286 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148291802469 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512237234385 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415671494568 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873599407872 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045662104096 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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