What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the invention over the past years.There are widespread that this will only lead to myriad of concerns, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. In this essay, I will elaborate the important inventions which are rendering enormous benefits.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits and the most benefited is by airplane. For instance, the most preponderant airplane in this today's technology had benefited specially towards in business view by limiting the time in travelling, not only contribute just on business markets but also lead to numerous other benefits in plethora fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, one benefits more when it comes to being effective but they can also enhance the productivity and quality, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Moreover, there are further more merits overs the inventions, secondly computer is also one of the most advance technology which made easier to all the companies in reduction over the time spending. For instance, in most of the companies during earlier days it was hinder-able task to achieve the project goals, but thanks to the high productivity of this technology which made easier to tackle with overall project views and to comply the deadline in time. Besides, its impact on something is far-reaching indeed. Hence, it’s apparent to have this ascend in the for future technology growth.
In view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude, despite of this inventions but the upside shall also to be looked careful and this benefits are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15916955017 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81739529761 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.268434539 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.545454545 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112914538852 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447593233729 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338483084466 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671596649451 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309503760685 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.